I found these revised recommendations much better. However, there are few points: 1. An index is certainly required. 2. In para. (63) there is reference to BEIR VII but not in the references. BEIR VII uses a DDREF of 1.5 whereas the recommendations continue to use 2.0 - Needs justification. 3. Figure 3 in Annex B is reversed and inverted in my copy. 4. No reference included for ICRP 23 mentioned in Para. (126).